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The Chronicles of Moses
The Man who would be Pharaoh

Epic Novel



The Man who would be Pharaoh



By Paul Rodricks



– The Man who would be Pharaoh


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Glossary of Ancient Egyptian Names  

Senmut, Senenmut        “Mother’s brother” 
Kemet                          Egypt, ‘black’ land 
Waset                          Thebes 
Mennefer                      Memphis 
On                               Heliopolis
Ta-Seti                        Cush, Kush
Ta netjer                     Punt

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PART ONE 
 CHAPTER 2


     1524 BC – Hatshepsut

   
    At first Senenmut, felt outraged and then alarmed over the fate awaiting the deposed Queen. His mind tried to seek relief by going back into the past when destiny brought them together at the royal palace in Waset.  

    Her father Tuthmosis I, had become the Pharaoh King and they had shifted the place of residence from Mennefer.

    Hatshepsut was the favorite daughter of Tuthmosis I and Queen Ahmosis. She was eight years old when Mose as a child of three, come to live at the palace with his parents. She renamed him Senenmut.

    He knew her as Ma’at-Kare. And, this was his favorite name to address her in private. They had grown up with her half-brother Tuthmosis II, and others of the royal family. The outside world hailed her as the "Pharaoh's Daughter”, the Crown Princess-in-waiting.

    Senenmut grew up getting to watch Hatshepsut turn into a beautiful woman, learning, and adapting to her role as the heir apparent. Senenmut himself was receiving the royal academic training, which the Pharaohs had to undergo. 

    By the time, Hatshepsut was about 16 years old both her parents were dead. 

    According to the royal policy of succession, she had to marry her half-brother, Tuthmosis II. She ruled as a Co-regent for a few years when the Pharaoh died of chronic illness. They had no issue of their own, but he left behind a secondary son Tuthmosis III, born of his concubine, Iset. Tuthmosis was two-years old when his father died.

    Since Tuthmosis was a minor, Hatshepsut continued to rule as the Co-regent Queen Pharaoh. 

    Hatshepsut was about twenty-two old by then, and Senenmut about 19 years. Living and officiating at the royal palace made them feel naturally attracted to each other.

    Left without a husband, she had turned to the strong, good-looking, talented, and resourceful young Senenmut for a relationship. In time, their friendship became intimate. Moreover, he was already beginning to assist her in governing Kemet. He helped to consolidate her power and influence over the court officials. That included the royal dignitaries, the political leaders, and the ever-powerful Amun-Ra priesthood.

    Thus, seven years later, both having decided that an opportune time had come, Hatshepsut declared herself the ruling Queen Pharaoh. Tuthmosis was still an underage.  

    Thereafter, she promoted Senenmut to the highest position in Kemet, as her Chief Vizier. In due course, his accomplishments earned him more than 20 other royal titles. Some of these were the Official Architect-Engineer, Civic Planner, Diplomat, and Military Commander. 

    Hatshepsut was twenty-five years of age, when she gave birth in secret to their daughter, Princess Neferure. Senenmut himself took the complete responsibility of educating their daughter. He groomed Neferure and prepared her for the royal duties of the Crown Princess.  
    As the Queen Pharaoh of Kemet, Hatshepsut was a   shrewd politician and a graceful diplomat. She used propaganda and skill to exercise her authority to reign over the Kemite Empire. To prove Kemet’s sovereignty, Queen Hatshepsut sent Senenmut on military expeditions and diplomatic missions. Her Vizier led the Kemite army to counter the aggressions and put down the rebellions in Ta-Seti and Ta netjer

    Queen Hatshepsut also promoted trade missions, herself participating in a memorable one to Ta netjer. The Kemites coveted and were always in search of precious and valuable goods such as gold, ivory, exotic animals, spices, and aromatic trees.

During her rule, Queen Pharaoh Hatshepsut commissioned Senenmut to undertake the works of her three-level Mortuary Complex - Djeser-Djeseru. Within this complex, Senenmut would undertake to build his secret underground tomb. Hatshepsut also restored the ruined temples in the Valley of the Kings and she built a large temple in the honor of her father. 

    To commemorate the 30-year Anniversary of her reign as the Queen Pharaoh, she ordered the building of two Sed obelisks.

    She claimed a direct divine lineage to the national god, by first claiming the title, “Daughter of Amun-Ra” and later proclaiming herself as "God's Wife of Amun-Ra.” Hatshepsut did this to consolidate her right to rule as Pharaoh since kingship belonged to males only. Further, she went to the extent of commemorating the renewal of her Pharaoh Anniversary, at the significant Hep Sed Festival tradition.

    Keen to accentuate her role as the Pharaoh, Hatshepsut took to dressing in the male costume of the Kemite Pharaoh. This consisted of the Shendyt Kilt, the Nemes headdress with its Uraeus and the khat head-cloth and the false beard. In private, Senenmut would jest about her alien way of dressing, but they both knew it was a necessity to endorse her role as the Pharaoh.

    Another side of her, which the Vizier had recognized during her reign, was about her strong traits inherited from her father, the mighty Pharaoh Tuthmosis I. She possessed the characteristics of a strong-willed, persistent, and non-comprising person. To her allegiance meant total commitment.  

    He wondered what led to the unexpected overthrow by Tuthmosis. Except for the usual talks and rumors, they had seen no danger signs nor been warned of any impending revolt.


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The Chronicles of Moses
The Man who would be Pharaoh

Epic Novel



The Man who would be Pharaoh



By Paul Rodricks



– The Man who would be Pharaoh


Now Available on Amazon.com

Historical-Ancient-Egyptian-Biblical Fiction Thriller.  

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Unique Novel with many DISCLOSURES.






Glossary of Ancient Egyptian Names  

Senmut, Senenmut        “Mother’s brother” 
Kemet                          Egypt, ‘black’ land 
Waset                          Thebes 
Mennefer                      Memphis 
On                               Heliopolis



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PART ONE 
 CHAPTER 1 (Continued)


          "There are those who remain loyal to the Queen and to you, my Lord. However, the enemies are many and powerful. They have betrayed for their own gain. Moreover, the Amun-Ra priests hold sway over them. Many court officials fear condemnation by the clergy as heretics, and they maintain their silence."

          "When did Tuthmosis overthrow the Queen?"

          "My Lord, the betrayal took place in secret a week ago. Most court workers and the people in the city were not aware of the drastic measures taken. Only three days ago, the Royal Court issued an official promulgation about the new King Pharaoh Tuthmosis."

          "Do you know the whereabouts of the Queen… is she safe?” This matter of utmost concern was the sole apprehension now engaging his mind. “I am sorry, my Lord. I do not have that information. No one seems to know the exact location of her confinement. But indications are that she is not in her Waset palace residence.”  

          "If, as you say the city gates are controlled, how did you manage to sneak out without being caught?"

          "With difficulty and some guile, my Lord Vizier. I was among the palace courier rally sent to the garrison, the last one to deliver a message to the Captain, before he vacated the outpost. Three days before, his scouts had reported sighting your encampment along the way.

          "The Captain evacuated the garrison the same night. In the darkness, I managed to fall back and hide outside the city wall. By then the Captain and his men had entered and the city gates closed."

          "Did you witness or come across any army scouts recessing the area, during the day, from wherever you were hiding?"

          "Yes, my Lord, I did see a team of about five men approaching the city wall. I assumed they were Co-regent’s scouts and kept my distance from them. I did not see them afterwards. They must have reached the city gate and let inside.

          "I walked back and half-ran towards the garrison, the route I knew you would be arriving, to warn you, my Lord. After daybreak, I must have been discovered and tracked by your scouts." He sounded miserable as he continued, "It grieves me, my Lord that I’ve been of no service to you, other than merely to warn you."

          Senenmut knew the man was telling the truth. Why else would he have risked his life to find and warn him?

          "Take a hold of yourself, young man. You did well. We shall award you for your loyalty."

          "Commander, tell your men to attend to this man's need."

          Djedefre had been mulling over the courier’s grave disclosure. His two Army Commanders and two army scouts were witness to it. They would understand the danger to Vizier’s life. Moreover, Senenmut’s troops now stood in conflict with the new Pharaoh, since they owed their allegiance to the Vizier. But, Djedefre knew his men well. Come what may, they would stand by their loyalty to their Commander-in-Chief.

          As the scouts were leading him away, the royal courtier pleaded with Senenmut. "My Lord, you must take care. Please do not attempt to approach the city. Co-regent Tuthmosis has rallied the Kemite military against you. The troops maintain station inside and outside the city-wall. You must return to the garrison before you decide your next move."

          Senenmut nodded in acknowledgement to the courtier as the scouts escorted him away. He then signaled Djedefre to follow him. They moved a short distance away from the others.

          "Commander, pass an order that a regiment of 100 troops turns back to the garrison with the camp followers. They will join the others we left behind. The rest of the troops will follow me in marching order towards the city wall."

          "I’ve understood you well, my Lord. I seek your leave now". Djedefre whirled his horse and rode back to his Second-in-Command, Senbi, to relay the order down the ranks.

          The arrangement that Senenmut had ordered soon took shape. A portion of the army headed back to the garrison. The larger part adopted the battle-formation and began marching behind the Commander-in-Chief’s chariot.

          For the sake of outside appearance, Senenmut strived hard to remain calm and collected. It was important for him to maintain his dignity before his commanders and soldiers.

          More than anything else, Senenmut's resolve was to hasten to the palace, as he feared for the life of the Queen. Whatever the consequences, he must face Tuthmosis’ threat if he were to go to the aid of his beloved Hatshepsut.
                   

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Preview of Chapter One (Continued)



The CHRONICLES OF MOSES Epic Novel

The Chronicles of Moses
The Man who would be Pharaoh

Epic Novel



The Man who would be Pharaoh



By Paul Rodricks



– The Man who would be Pharaoh


Now Available on Amazon.com

Historical-Ancient-Egyptian-Biblical Fiction Thriller.  

$0.99 only LIMITED TIME OFFER ... 

Unique Novel with many DISCLOSURES.






Glossary of Ancient Egyptian Names  

Senmut, Senenmut        “Mother’s brother” 
Kemet                          Egypt, ‘black’ land 
Waset                          Thebes 
Mennefer                      Memphis 
On                               Heliopolis



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PART ONE 
 CHAPTER 1 (Continued)


Across the flat plains of Nile, Senenmut first saw the swirling sand rise above the paved road, and then the vague shadows of men appear out of the dust. They were running towards his position.

Senenmut motioned to Djedefre, who got the cue and signaled his troops to fall in line. They all began to fast march towards the approaching figures. On the distant horizon, the high city wall stood out as a continuous gray line. Bright sunlight shone over the entire desert landscape since breaking camp at the light of dawn a few hours before. The cool weather of the morning hours was turning warmer. It would get harsher by noon and remain so until sunset.

Inside the thick clay city-wall, stood several oval-shaped fortresses. Some of them looming six meters over the wall. The main wall built of mud-bricks of dual-wall thickness had protective towers inside. Longbow archers manned the ports of these towers along the ramparts. In addition, mobile towers ran alongside the wall for added protection at its vulnerable or weaker sections. Outside, surrounding the front of the city-wall, were deep-dug trenches, which further fortified the defense. Senenmut was familiar with the Kemet’s defense system, which he had helped build and improve upon from time to time.

As he continued to ride ahead of the others, the scene ahead was becoming distinct to him. Senenmut noticed a man trying to keep up with the rest. They had picked up speed and soon he stopped his chariot a few feet away from them. Behind him, he heard the hoof beats of the cavalry mingled with the rushing footsteps of his soldiers, thumping on the paved road.


Djedefre rode past Senenmut and reined in his horse in front of the leading man, whom he recognized as one of his later army scouts.

"Speak up, man. Explain yourself.” 

Covered with dust and short of breath, the scout leader bowed before the Commander. “Sir, we found this courtier," pointing to the man in a disheveled state who stood looking up at the Vizier in abject surrender. "He begs to speak to our Lord, the Vizier. The man insists he has an important message for our Lord.”

"All right, bring him to me first," ordered the Commander. Senenmut, who had been listening to the exchange, nodded his approval to Djedefre. 

Though he looked disheveled in the dress of the Royal Court official, the courtier tried to regain his composure. He left his place between the scouts and ran towards the Army Commander, suddenly turning towards the Chief Steward’s chariot. 

He was crying out, "My Lord, my Lord… I must speak to you..."

Djedefre cut short his advance by riding his horse between the man and the Vizier. He warned him, raising his lance. "Step away man, before I run you through." Two of the scouts had already reached the courtier and taken hold of him. Senenmut having observed the whole scene, dismissed any threats from the frightened man, and said to Djedefre, "Tell your men to let go of him. He means no harm. Let him come to me."

The miserable courtier heard what Senenmut had said, shook himself loose, and staggered near the Vizier's chariot. He was trembling and in a bad state of mind. He bowed low to the ground pleading, "My Lord Vizier, you must turn back.” His voice quivered, as he spoke. “Co-regent has deposed our beloved Queen Pharaoh. Your life is in danger..."

Senenmut, though shaken inside, strived to maintain his composure. "Courtier, what’re you rambling about? Have you lost your mind?" 

“No, my Lord, I speak the truth or you may strike off my head. I am Makalani, the son of Khapiri, the stable-keeper of our great Queen. I was witness to the coup. Lord Co-regent Tuthmosis has imprisoned the Queen and taken over the throne. He has the support of most court officials, the Amun-Ra clergy, and the royal army, which he commands." The Chief Steward was listening with patience, but felt the need to interrupt. "When did this happen? Why was no message sent to me?”

"My Lord, the Co-regent ordered the immediate closure of the city gates. He has them manned by his own palace troops. Now nobody or nothing goes out or comes in unchecked by them. Our beloved Queen had dispatched her personal courier to warn you. But the Co-regent’s spies intercepted him as he tried to leave the city.” 

“Was there no opposition at all to Tuthmosis? What happened to those loyal nobles and officials? Did they all turn traitors?”

                                   To be continued...


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Preview of Chapter One

The CHRONICLES OF MOSES Epic Novel

The Chronicles of Moses
The Man who would be Pharaoh

Epic Novel





The Man who would be Pharaoh



By Paul Rodricks



– The Man who would be Pharaoh


Now Available on Amazon.com

Historical-Ancient-Egyptian-Biblical Fiction Thriller.  

$0.99 only LIMITED TIME OFFER ... 

Unique Novel with many DISCLOSURES.






Glossary of Ancient Egyptian Names  

Senmut, Senenmut        “Mother’s brother” 
Kemet                           Egypt, ‘black’ land 
Waset                           Thebes 
Mennefer                      Memphis 
On                                Heliopolis



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PART ONE 
 CHAPTER 1 
    
1483 BC 

Waset – Outside the Capital of Kemet.   


     As the royal Kemite Chief Vizier Senenmut, approached the Waset city, he could not put away the notion that something did not seem right. 
     About seven kilometers earlier, his entourage had arrived at the last Kemite garrison and found it deserted. According to regulation, at least fifty armed soldiers manned the garrison under the command of a Captain. An unmanned garrison was a capital offense. The reason had to be a grave situation for the soldiers to desert the primary outpost of the city. Senenmut made sure to leave a few soldiers to man the deserted garrison.  
     A series of doubts continued to trouble his mind, despite his attempts to brush them aside. What were the gods trying to warn him? 
     His military campaign in Ta netjer was successful. He had put down the rebellion in some of the kingdoms there and gained their allegiance to the Queen Pharaoh of Kemet. In doing so, he had been the recipient of innumerable gifts. He also had taken as slaves the princes from the rebels’ royal households to prevent future uprisings. 
     Amidst his current disturbing thoughts, he turned to look back. He saw his Army Commanders and Captains following him on horseback. Behind them marched the long lines of the foot soldiers, followed by the camp-workers accompanying the supply-train. The latter comprised cart-driven and animal laden goods - gifts, provisions and weapons. Before the contingent of the rear guard, walked the party of slaves. 
     Senenmut did not perceive any danger in the vicinity. After all, he was a few miles away from the main-gate of the capital city, Waset. Moreover, he was leading a division of 700 battle-hardened troops to fear any personal danger. 
     Slowing his chariot to position it between the horses of his two commanding officers, he turned towards the senior one of the two. "Djedefre, why haven’t yet the army scouts reported.”  
     "My Lord, they should be here anytime now." 
     "My mind’s apprehensive, Commander. Something is amiss. 
     Send another batch of scouts. They must report back the situation ahead without delay.” 
     Djedefre saw the look of concern reappear on the face of his Commander-in-Chief as he finished speaking.
     The royal Vizier assumed his aristocrat posture in the chariot. He was at least five feet ten inches tall. His features consisted of a broad forehead, an aquiline nose, thick lips and a strong jaw. His dark-brown eyes were sharp and intelligent. Clean-shaven of the face and head, the Vizier maintained a robust and muscular built.
     Djedefre saw beside him a noble man who possessed all the experience and wisdom of a crown prince-in-the-waiting. He had seen the Vizier prove himself in the role of a brilliant Administrator, a proficient Architect, and a successful Diplomat. 
     Senenmut’s Army Commander had many a time served under the Chief Vizier in his foreign military expeditions. He had observed firsthand the military skills of his Commander-in-Chief. Djedefre, moreover, knew that Senenmut was a trained combatant. He would take an active part in any armed conflict rather than just direct his troops. 
     Now his leader's apprehensions were beginning to infect him as well. His investigation at the unmanned garrison had found no clue to its abandonment. 
     "It shall be so done, my Lord.”  
     The Army Commander gave the order to his next in command, Senbi, and four experienced army scouts left their unit. Senenmut resumed his chariot ride at the normal pace. 
     He was returning to his home at the Waset palace, looking towards a normal life after eighteen long months of absence. Time well-nigh for rest and comfort after months of stress suffered from warfare and hard diplomacy abroad. Most significantly, he would soon be reuniting with his beloved Hatshepsut, the Queen Pharaoh of Kemet.
                                                     
***

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